Please critique my admissions essay.

<p>I would like a few people to read and critique my essay (roughly 380 words). Please be an experience writer. Thank you.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to look over it!</p>

<p>thank you. would anyone else be willing to take a look?</p>

<p>Sure. Where are you applying?</p>

<p>I can help if you still need someone to look over it? </p>

<p>Yeah, I would like as much input as possible. thank you </p>

<p>I can help if you still need it.</p>

<p>Also please make sure the people you give your essay to are credible. It seems like coolpianocat goes to these threads pretty frequently, so just make sure the people you give it to are not the type that will plagiarize. </p>

<p>Alright do you want me to pm you or will you? </p>

<p>I can review it as well. :slight_smile: </p>

<p>Pm me</p>