<p>First post! :D I'm really looking forward to this place! :D</p>
<p>So anyway, if you like you can PM me for one of my admission essays-I am having second thoughts about using it at all, so a little input would be appreciated before i make my final decision.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Sure! I would love to read over your admission essay. Just PM it to me and I will give you some essay critiques for you and let you know what I think about your essay.</p>
<p>PM your essay to me, please.</p>
<p>if you want strong critique sure....</p>
<p>thanks...pmed you :)</p>
<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>
<p>thanks rocketpower...im currently working on editing my piece, so i guess i'll get back to you once i feel it's ready for the public eye...if you're still available, of course. :)</p>