<p>I was wondering if someone could critique and maybe edit my essay a little because it's my first and I'm not sure about it. I'd really appreciate it. i'll PM the prompt and essay if you're willing. Thanks.</p>
<p>I was wondering if someone could critique and maybe edit my essay a little because it's my first and I'm not sure about it. I'd really appreciate it. i'll PM the prompt and essay if you're willing. Thanks.</p>
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