Please grade my essay #2

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<p>Essay Prompt: "Each fresh crisis we encounter is an opportunity in disguise."
Assignment: What are your thoughts on the statement above? </p>

<p>A crisis or mistake are always an opportunity to learn, they are what we gain our experience from. Experience is gained ultimately through mistakes. This so called experience develops into wisdom.
Take for example my middle school years. In midde school, I was one of those kids who rarely studied for any sort of test; I guess you could have called me indolent. It was quite a sight to my teachers if I ever completed my homework or if I ever voluntarily raised my hand to answer a question in class. I did not take school or my education seriously at the time as I was a frivolous young boy. Unfortunately, all of those imprudent things I had done contributed to my inordinately low grades. After being punished a myriad of times by my parents and teachers, I realized that my foolish acts were not going to take me anywhere, and would eventually leave me in a quagmire.
Presently, I use this experience as a guide to what I should and should not do. The crisis that I had created ironically became an opportunity for me to change myself. Had this opportunity not came about, maybe I would still be that same fatuous child I was. This opportunity in disguise helped sculpt me into the education-wary man I am today.
A crisis can be looked upon as a debacle or a chance. If one thinks of a crisis to be a chance, one will be able to reach further than he or she ever though, an will accomplish the unimaginable.</p>