please help! senior rep speech that i'm turning in tomorrow!

<p>so here's my speech. i'd love input, revisions, any advice or assurance hahaha. thank you so much for helping me. really, you are awesome.</p>

<p>Hi guys! My name is Blankity Blank, and for the next few minutes I’m going to try my best to gain your support and earn your votes for senior class representative.
Some of the most important traits that I could offer would be my commitment, reliability, and the fact that I won’t make a promise I can’t keep. I’ve also had leadership experience from being the president of Key Club while working on community projects and volunteering. If elected, I would be determined to make our senior year worthwhile and memorable, as it should be.
We are actually going to be seniors next year. Crazy right?! A year from now We will be the ones about to overcome senioritis for good. We will be the ones that are anxious, yet excited, for the coming of our many futures. We need to make the most of next year before we have to go and live in the real world. So I think we should have as many opportunities and experiences as possible before that time comes. And that brings me to an idea I have for next year. There are many things I’ve wanted to experience and learn how to do, but just haven’t had the chance. And I’m sure many of you have felt the same way. What are some things that you’d want to try, that you’ve never been given a chance to do? (Ask them, hope some people answer). I would like to make these kinds of opportunities available so that you can experience what YOU want to before we head off into the great unknown. Whether it’s throwin’ down in a poetry slam or learning how to tango, whatever you guys want to do, if it is within the realms of Blank High possibility and enough people find it as appealing as you do, I will be determined to make it happen. We can try things we have always wanted to do, and maybe we can encounter new interests we have never realized before.
If you like what I have to offer, then I promise to do all that I can to make our senior year memorable and enjoyable. I want this position because I would love to be a part of the group that has the number one priority of providing all of us with the activities that bring us together as a class. I feel that I have what it takes to represent our class and help organize new events as well as the past ones. Because in the end this year is all about preparing for the future, having fun, and leaving behind a legacy.</p>

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<p>Is everyone’s going to be this long?</p>

<p>it’s supposed to be 2-3 minutes. oh geeze do you think it’s too long?</p>

<p>No no, it’s just at my school they’re really informal and brief, so if your was to be the only long one… it would have been awkward. </p>

<p>It sounds good, good luck. Make sure you read it like you want it.</p>

<p>hahah thanks! i’ll keep that in mind, i do NOT want to stand up there forever. we’re only turning them in tomorrow and making them in a week so i’ll make sure mine isn’t loooooooong.</p>