<p>No, just kidding. Far from flawless, just wanted to grab your attention.</p>
<p>But really, would someone be so kind as to read through my intellectual vitality essay? I'll give you a billion telepathic hugs.</p>
<p>i will. i already submitted my stanford app on the 21st.</p>
<p>Cheeky move!
Hahah, I’d like to give it a read 
And I’m not applying to Stanford.</p>
<p>I’ll read it too. Not applying to Stanford but I’m a pretty good writer (so I’ve been told) haha and I have something I’d like looked over too. :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it, i helped my friend with her essays last year, she got into Stanford :D</p>
<p>I sent you an email with the things that i would change (since i cannot pm…) anyways i hope my critique helped.</p>
<p>I will read it too if you want</p>
<p>i can help too! pm me</p>
<p>Please, grace me with your flawless essay.</p>
<p>Although I am new to this site, I have years of experience writing Annual report in my company.</p>
<p>I can help you take a look, and help polishing your essay.</p>
<p>Hahahaha who can ignore that title!</p>
<p>haha I’m glad it worked. And thanks all for the help, I feel more confident with your feedback.</p>
<p>I’m also applying! I’d be glad to read yours and give feedback!</p>