Please look at my essay

[Tanboyrunfast]

<p>Just wrote a common app essay that I kind of like. I have not edited it at all, and it was written in about 30 minutes. I want to know whether or not it's worth keeping and finishing / using. It's also about 300 words too long, so I need to know where to cut.</p>

<p>Please let me know if you'd like to read, and I will PM it to you.</p>

[halcyonheather]

<p>I can read it.</p>

[reyalpmark]

<p>I’d like to read.</p>

[amidupeuple]

<p>Shoot it my way.</p>

[Orideus]

<p>Just PM haha :)</p>

[ilaughinghouse]

<p>I’ll read it PM me</p>