<p>I'm getting a head start on college essays, and I've written one so far. I want someone to read it though and critique it/give constructive criticism. </p>
<p>It is over 500 words though, so I was hoping someone could help me find a way to bring it under that limit.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
<p>Is this the one I already read?</p>
<p>Yes it is, but I changed it a lot</p>
<p>I could look at it! pm me</p>
<p>PM it to me. I’ll read it</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>PM me I’ll read</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>PM it over aha</p>
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<p>I’ll read it. I hate wordiness and getting things concise is the first thing I do when editing.</p>
<p>I’ll read it, PM me!</p>