PLEASE PLEASEEEE college essay help!!!!

<p>hey guys,</p>

<p>I'm applying to Bates College, and right now it's my number one choice. I heard they put a lot of weight into the school's essay, and I chose the "Why Bates?" one. I JUST STARTED late last night, and it's still under construction!! ANY help would be great!!! Just ask and I'll PM it out, but 08's, pahleasee don't steal it? Thanks guys!!!</p>

<p>What other topics are there?
And sure you can PM it, don't worry I won't rip it off or anything...</p>