<p>Hello everyone. I have just finished writing my Commonapp Essay on the first prompt. I would really appreciate it if some of you can read and provide me feedback on my essay. Honest opinions and constructive criticism will be appreciated. And if there are any grammatical errors please let me know that.</p>
<p>Sure. Why not.</p>
<p>I would be happy to read it</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>