Please read and critique my essay...

<p>I finished my biographical essay but I'm really unsure about it. If you would like to read it please message me. :) thank you!
Rose</p>

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I can take a look and give you a critique ASAP. I’ll be online all day, helping QBers.</p>

<p>Hi there!
I’ll be online as well, so if you ever need someone to look things over, shoot me a PM :)</p>