Please read my essay!

<p>hey! i'm not applying to college yet, but i've written a personal statement for an application to a prestigious programme next year. if you want to critique my essay, leave a message here and i'll send it over. thank you!!</p>

<p>I can help you. but can you help me on my 250 essay for U of North Carolina? lol just check for any grammar mistakes.</p>

<p>pmed you...</p>