Please read my essays any suggestions plz

<p>prompt 1
What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field — such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities — and what you have gained from your involvement. </p>

<p>When I was a child I wanted a computer so much that I started buying parts for a computer and started building one for myself. As my interest grew, I decided to pay attention more into the way on how programs made the computer work efficiently. Since the day I started college I decided to take a Computer Programming Class at college , since that day my desire of studying Computer Science was definitely. I've taken Computer Programming classes at De Anza College, and within each class my knowledge and interest about computer programming has grown even more. Becoming a computer programmer has become one of my goals, and by being committed I know I can accomplish my goal. By learning from anything related to Computer Science and accomplishing each goal ahead of me.
Thoroughly, I consider myself one of those people who like to learn anything or anyone I can. For example, I always tend to ask my brother anything related to Computer Programming, since he is a Software Developer. The more he talks about the way software makes information handling easier, the more I want to learn. In college, my desire and interest of learning new computer languages have lead me to learn languages such as C programming and Java. Each one of these languages has an exceptionally interesting way of style and complexity, and each language requires time and commitment to learn. That's why patience and perseverance is a necessity, and something I've learned throughout my computer classes. By learning from the courses I've taken and from other people, I surely have gained knowledge that will help me become a good computer programmer.
So, what if someone asks me, what I've done to accomplish my main goal? First of all graduating from high school and studying in college are some of my goals that I accomplished by being committed. Furthermore, as my goal of becoming a computer programmer emerged, I decided that my next main goal was to major in Computer Science. That's why by Learning from each program I've done and learning through each class I've taken from my computer programming classes, helps me take a step closer of accomplishing my main goal which. For example, some of the courses I've taken are Beginners C, Intermediate C and Java with Object Oriented approach, and each class helps me understand more of the complexity and relationship between the new languages I will be learning and the ones I already do. Accomplishing a goal takes time, and by learning more about computer programming I surely will accomplish my goal step by step.</p>

<p>prompt 2
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>I will always remember when my mom asked me if I had finished my homework and chores every day, even on holidays and I really thank my mother for encouraging me to be responsible in my life. Consequently, the most important quality I've always said to be one of my strongest basis of my life is responsibility. For me, this quality is very important in life; since without it; chores works and projects would never be achieved. Being responsible is doing the right thing at the right time. Furthermore, I've always tried to apply it in every aspect of my life. In addition, I've being encouraging other people to try and to practice it everywhere they can. The places where you can specially see most of my commitments are at school and in my day to day basis. Being responsible requires been committed and taking into account every action one does.
Thoroughly, school is one of the places where you can see my commitment of being responsible. I tend to be on my projects and doing them on time. As I've always told myself "Don't leave the things you can do today for tomorrow." Moreover, when projects are in groups I tend to encourage other people to be responsible and to put into action the most important "team work". At school, people thought I was crazy, because every time I got home from school I started to do my homework. My mother always said to take a rest first and then do the homework; however I've always liked doing homework right after getting home from school or college because it makes me feel less preoccupied of my chores. Being responsible and doing the projects on time gives me a satisfaction of not only for the grade, but also for the knowledge and wisdom gained from putting my learned abilities into action.
In addition, being responsible is not only doing chores or work, but also doing the right thing at the right time. What is doing the right thing? Doing the right thing is taking the correct decision at any time. Being responsible for every action is the most important thing I've encouraged myself to do, under any circumstances. For example, when I used to work in my parents shop, every time I made a mistake I always took responsibility of it. This not only made me practice responsibility, but also made me a better person since I learned from the mistakes I made. Also, it shows character and makes a person trustworthy, since he or she will not need the supervision of another to do his or her own work. As John Baptiste Moliére quotes "It is not only for what we do that we are held responsible, but also for what we do not do."As in our daily basis we must be responsible for every action we do.
Finally, practicing responsibility is one of the most basic steps I've considered practicing throughout my life. No matter where I am, I will always keep practicing responsibility even in school or in my daily life basis. Since, responsibility benefits a person with other good qualities such as making one look trustworthy. No matter if we are at school or at work, people like working with school mates or coworkers who are responsible in their lives, that's why I will always keep practicing responsibility and encouraging everyone to practice it.</p>

<p>Any sugestions please! thanks!</p>