<p>Hello all,</p>
<p>Please HELP ME!</p>
<p>UNC Chapel Hill is my ideal school out of the ones I am applying to. The acceptance rate for transfers is around 40% and my college GPA is around 3.6. I feel like my chances are pretty good, however my essay will quite possibly be the deciding factor.</p>
<p>I am currently working on my Common App essay to apply to 7 or 8 schools as a transfer student, Fall 2013. I have just recently started my draft but it ended up way to long! I need to cut out about 350 words, so suggestions of what's actually critical to include would be extremely helpful.</p>
<p>I would greatly appreciate any and all comments or advice on how to improve! Please comment/message me if you'd be willing to take a look.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>