<p>hi, i have rewritten my essay and hopefully it is much better than the last. here is the latest and hopefully the last rewrite.</p>
<p>reply back for a copy. all those who reply will get a copy.</p>
<p>hey,let me know if I can be of any help</p>
<p>hey ill read it</p>
<p>I will read it</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>I'd be glad to glance over it</p>