Read my UC essay please

<p>So I revised my essays several times and got different opinions on it from it being good enough to send over rewrite the whole thing all over. I'm totally confused. Can someone give me some feedback on my essay.</p>

<p>I can offer you my opinion if you like...PM or email it.</p>

<p>i can help read it.</p>

<p>I'll give it a good look, PM</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>suree..ill read it</p>

<p>sure, ill read it
pm me:)</p>