<p>Post here and I'll PM it to you, please don't plagarize.</p>
<p>I'm using the same essay for every school...problem being that the length requirements range from 300-400 words - which is about 1 page - to 2-3 pages for UMD I think. I've been freaking out trying to shorten it to 400 words, but...its still about 570. I don't know what else to take out without losing meaning or effect, and I could really use an outside opinion.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>BUMP...really need some help...</p>
<p>I saw your thread and would love to read your essay and give feedback...
PM me..</p>
<p>Bumperooni...</p>
<p>I'll be happy to read it! pm me!</p>
<p>I'll pm back my thoughts : ) </p>
<p>I'm applying to mich. too lol</p>
<p>Thanks guys, any other volunteers?</p>
<p>pick me... yeah</p>
<p>Don't mean to be impatient, but I still have no feedback and I'm really trying to get this done.</p>
<p>So here's another BUMP...</p>
<p>Aight- I'll give you feedback within 24 hours of you pming me. pm me. I've always given feedback on an essay in less than 24 hours.</p>
<p>i'll give u some feedback..pm me...</p>
<p>Qualified Yalie here, I'll givefeedback.</p>
<p>Thanks, PMs sent to both of you.</p>
<p>If anyone else wants to help, the more the merrier ;)!</p>
<p>I'll read it too.</p>
<p>I'm getting a littttttle nervous sending the essay out to people and not getting any response. Hopefully they just decided they don't have time to look at it right now...as opposed to only wanting me to send it to them so they could use it as their own, never really intending to give me feedback. Out of the 9 people I sent it to, only 2 responded so far...:(</p>
<p>Bumpness...</p>
<p>Only people that intend to actually respond, please.</p>
<p>PM me I will read it!!!</p>