<p>Decision: Accepted</p>
<p>Objective:</p>
<p>SAT I (breakdown): 2250 (CR:800 W:770 M: 680)</p>
<p>ACT: Did not take</p>
<p>SAT II: Lit (780), French (800)</p>
<p>Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0</p>
<p>Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School doesn’t rank, but in the top 1%</p>
<p>AP (place score in parenthesis): AP German (5), AP French (5)</p>
<p>IB (place score in parenthesis): 7 in English HL</p>
<p>Senior Year Course Load: I’m taking the German Abitur so: Japanese, advanced English, German, French, Ethics, History, advanced Biology, advanced Chemistry, Math
— very rigorous (the German Abitur will gain you an advanced standing if you request it, which I obviously won’t be doing because who–on scholarship - would want to shorten the already limited time they can spend at such an amazing institution?!) </p>
<p>Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): 1st place at National German Foreign Languages Competition in French; English; Japanese; Farsi, Scholar of the National German Academic Foundation, Honors by Minister of Culture for extraordinary voluntary service, Honors by US Department of Veteran Affairs for extraordinary voluntary service, David Geffen School of Medicine at UCLA departmental honors for extraordinary voluntary service, selected to represent the European Youth Parliament Germany at the 75th International Session of the EYP in Riga</p>
<p>Subjective:</p>
<p>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Chamber choir (lead soprano), European Youth Parliament (delegate, journalist, chairperson), municipal student council of Frankfurt (VP), state student council (board member), student council §</p>
<p>Job/Work Experience: Tutor/ Interned at a hotel in Essex, GB</p>
<p>Volunteer/Community service: Volunteered in Epilepsy research at David Geffen School of Medicine at UCLA for 250+ hours, volunteered at the Epilepsy Center of Excellence WLAVA for 160 hours, served as a mentor to underprivileged students and tutored them</p>
<p>Summer Activities: Chaired in EYP sessions around Europe, volunteered at UCLA, taught myself Dutch, worked to save up for college, studied for the SAT (courses are too damn expensive), worked out a lot</p>
<p>Essays: About the roots of racism – the Princeton essay (10/10), personal essay about how my work on the state student council affected me, since I met so many inspirational people and underwent sort of a personal/political story of initiation (7/10)</p>
<p>Teacher Recommendation: English/Math – both (10/10)</p>
<p>Counselor Rec: We don’t have counselors, so my English teacher wrote me an additional one with more of a social focus (10/10)</p>
<p>Additional Rec: /</p>
<p>Interview: Was the only public school kid sans richy rich parents who dared to apply from around my area, so he was a bit baffled at first. Lasted like three hours and we mainly talked about destructive/ human rights undermining American policies and the lack of pluralism in the bipartisan system we witness today. My interviewer was very cool and I honestly just went to Starbucks and had a chat with an engaging person, so it would have paid off either way. </p>
<p>Other
Intended Major: Comparative Literature/Philosophy (we’ll see…)</p>
<p>State (if domestic applicant):</p>
<p>Country (if international applicant): Germany </p>
<p>School Type: Public (Gymnasium)</p>
<p>Nationality: Parents are Iranian (political asylum seekers), but I was born in Germany </p>
<p>Gender: Female</p>
<p>Income Bracket: ~9000$</p>
<p>Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): first generation, single mother, low income household</p>
<p>Reflection
Strengths: Personality (I guess), awards, I speak eight foreign languages, SAT critical reading and writing scores, the Princeton essay, the fact that I aligned my extracurriculars with my political mindset and what I was most invested in as a person, volunteering in the neurology department at UCLA also showed my commitment to my vocational/ethical aspirations (hopefully going to do pre-med to work with Doctors Without Borders)</p>
<p>Weaknesses: Definitely SAT match scores, personal essay, if they didn’t know that sports teams aren’t a thing at German schools that as well</p>
<p>Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I tried to be candid (probably why I got rejected by Harvard) about my ideas and values so that if I ended up at a school it’d be the perfect fit for me and not for the person I pretended to be in order to be accepted. In my personal essay I dedicated quite a few lines to a harsh criticism of educational systems and the indoctrination they include in many countries which obliterates the meaning of freedom completely. Especially to an American audience, this might have seemed too “leftist” but then again, some Americans consider Obama a socialist….</p>
<p>Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted: Princeton, JHU Waitlisted: Yale Rejected: Harvard, Stanford</p>