proofread my common app essay on women empowerment!?

<p>I would greatly appreciate if if someone took a few minutes to proofread my common app essay for grammar and content and such.</p>

<p>happy new year!</p>

<p>I will gladly do it for you. Btw what schools are you applying to?</p>

<p>ill read it if you read mine!!! PM me</p>

<p>Ill read it i already sent my application in so i can focus on helping you. :)</p>