Can somebody please read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I was wondering if anybody here could do me a favor and proofread and critique my common app essay. I'd really appreciate your honest opinions.</p>

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<p>I’m working on an essay right now lol. Could use a break though… Shoot it over!</p>

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<p>Thanks, I just sent it.</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>anybody? .</p>

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<p>You can send it to me along with your prompt if you’d like</p>

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<p>Thanks I appreciate it, just sent it. Anybody else?</p>

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<p>Sure; send it over whenever.</p>

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<p>Ill read it</p>

<p>Sent from my VS910 4G using CC</p>

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<p>Sent both. Anybody else?</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>bump . .</p>

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<p>can someone please read mine, its a bit quirky though</p>

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<p>bornalegend, I would be happy to do so. PM me!</p>

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<p>I’m happy to read any. PM me</p>