Proofread my UChicago extended essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Chicago ✅
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<p>Can somebody proofread my essay?
I have terrible grammar, and I need general feedback with paragraphing, word choices...general stuff. </p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>Send it homie</p>

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<p>fo sho… pm me</p>

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<p>send itttt. i’ll give constructive criticism</p>

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<p>Yeah sure. Pm me</p>

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<p>pm me too.</p>

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<p>I can help you vet it.</p>

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<p>I will! PM it to me.!</p>

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<p>pm me!! love proofreading lol</p>