<p>School: North Carolina State University
GPA: 3.9(currently a sophmore, will apply as a Junior)
Major: Biological Sciences(aka Biology) with a concentration in Human Biology
Extra circular Activities:
-Volunteer at UNC Hospitals(6 hours a week)
-Undergraduate Lab Assistant at NCSU(10+ hours a week)
-Assistant in the Pre-Health Club at NCSU(manage group meetings arrange to have guest speakers for meetings, and also deal with administrative tasks)
-Had an internship over the summer(worked 60+ hours a week)
- Volunteer every Saturday morning to help out a local para-pelagic rugby team("Muderball")
HS Stats: 4.45(weighted), 3.9(unweighted)
SAT: 1850(really bad I know, but standardized tests are extremely tough for me)
-Was in the Medical Science Academy in HS(dual-enrolled at local community college and took classes)
Hook: I also come from a very low income family(I am not sure if I want to include this in my transfer essay)</p>
<p>Thanks for the input! I am hopeful that I can get in, but the only aspect that really worries about the application process is the transfer essay. Any good advice on how to approach writing the “why Carolina” essay prompt?</p>
<p>As a current freshman at NCSU, I’d say that you have a good chance, given that at your point in the game they’ll place more emphasis on your college performance. As long as you didn’t drop the ball in a class like organic chemistry (assuming that you’re on the standard track) I think you’ll get in.</p>
try to cast your current school in the best light possible
point out a few specific flaws about the school that are hindering your ability to achieve your goals, whether they be personal, academic, or professional goals
talk about specific things at Carolina that “fix” the issues you discussed in (2)</p>
<p>if you want to talk more specifically, or want me to look over your essay once it’s written, shoot me a PM</p>