<p>Can someon please read my questbridge essay?It's supposed to be a essay for a program geared to connecting low-income famlies to presitigious colleges. I'mnot asking for grammatical mistakes, just some general constructive criticism?????!!! If I could message you or something that would be great. The topic is "We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations and accomplished your academic successes. Please describe the factors and challenges that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How have these factors caused you to grow? (800 word limit)</p>
<p>I can read it!</p>
<p>sure! you can message me! :)</p>
<p>You might also want to ask on the Questbridge forum (under the FA & Scholarships forum) as members there might have a better idea of what the QB program is looking for in the essay.</p>