question about my essay on rice app

<p>hey im applying to rice and i'm using the rice app (not comm app). i originally wrote an essay for the comm app and i want to use it for the rice app, but i'm not sure if it fits the rice app prompt (What perspective do you feel that you will contribute to life at Rice?). i guess on a stretch, my essay would fit that prompt... but im not sure.
could someone be willing to read it and give me some feedback? </p>

<p>thanks!!
and MERRY CHRISTMAS!</p>

<p>sure! :) send it on over!</p>

<p>thanks! hm i thot i sent it, but it's not under my "sent messages" folder thing. did u recieve my essay yet? lol i dont want to like send u another pm if u already got it -_-</p>

<p>i did..ill get to it soon..i have a head ache right now, and i cant work on an empty stomach! lolz. ill have them to you tonite!</p>

<p>i'll take a look :)</p>