Question about my Essay

<p>I just completed my first essay for Wake Forest University, "What is your Academic Passion?" and was wondering if anyone would be willing to take a look at it and provide me with some pointers. I would appreciate any input on my essay. Please ask me in this thread if you would like to, because I don't feel comfortable posting it. I'll PM it to anyone who wants to take a look. Thanks!</p>

<p>I'll read it if you don't mind the small conflict of interest. I'm also applying to Wake and writing the same one.</p>

<p>Thanks scarletleavy for the offer, but I'd prefer a non Wake applicant, nothing against you or anything.</p>

<p>Is Wake an LAC? I'll take a look at the essay. I'm harsh at times, but effective.</p>