Looking for some good advice on my essay

College Essays
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<p>Hello! Is anyone here interested in looking at my common application essay? For reference, I am applying to Princeton, Columbia, CMU, Duke, UNC Chapel Hill, and NC State (resident of NC). I'd appreciate any constructive criticism!</p>

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<p>Sure. I’d be happy to help.</p>

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<p>I’d love to critique it :)</p>

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<p>Thank you guys! I sent you a PM with the essay, I appreciate your time!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help if you’re still looking</p>

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<p>Sent! Thank you. I can always use another person’s feedback!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read!</p>

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<p>Alright, sent! Thank you.</p>

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<p>yes i would like to read it for you.</p>