<p>Hey there. Sorry, this is going to be a long post, but I want some accurate answers, so I want to be thorough.</p>
<p>Usually I don't subject myself to other people's opinion when it comes to things like this, but I'm currently a freshman at UCSD, and because I really don't like the school, I've chosen to try my luck in transferring after one year. [Meaning that I'm trying to transfer to another school as an incoming sophomore].</p>
<p>First, I'm gonna talk about my college performance:</p>
<p>I'm a Bioengineering:Pre-Medical major[it's an actual track of bioengineering here at UCSD, not me trying to say 'hey! look at me! i'm going to be a doctor like every other freshman in college'] and I have a minor in music. </p>
<p>My first quarter, I attempted 20 units while working part time and trying out for the male rowing team. I did ultimately withdraw from my math class due to the intense workload, and I cut myself from the crew team due to time commitments in the next quarter [which would be the one I'm currently enrolled in], bringing me to a total of 16 units. Pending a student petition that I've filed, I'm expecting a GPA of a 3.42.</p>
<p>In my second quarter, I'm attempting 21 units, except I'm not planning on dropping any classes, nor am I going to, and I'm expecting to do quite well.</p>
<p>Right now, I'm enrolled in my college's honors program, and have secured a recommendation from the provost of my college, who knows me on a first name basis through my college's honors program. [UCSD is split into six different undergraduate schools, and much like the chancellor would be the head of UCSD as a whole, the provost is the head of the individual colleges]</p>
<p>Also, I believe I can secure a recommendation from my orchestra conductor who is impressed with my performance in his orchestra. [This comes in later, in terms of significance].</p>
<p>Second, I'm gonna say why I'd like to transfer :
The school lacks school spirit, and the majority of the student body exudes laziness and a lack of motivation. There are several instances where I question how quite a few of these students even got into this school itself. The amount of extracurricular options are few and far between because of a fledgling sports program and a very limited-scope of clubs [outside of the standard occupation or ethnic based clubs]. The research options are minimal, and are quite unwelcoming for freshman and sophomores. I don't feel comfortable on campus here, and I feel like I don't belong. Plus, the music department here is terrible, and pursuing a minor in music, I can say that that affects me just because the lack of support of the arts from the administration [and student body] is pretty depressing. I could rattle off a few reasons, but those are the main points I'd like to make.</p>
<p>Third, my high school performace was alright. I got a 3.5 UW GPA and a 4.0 W GPA. My SAT score was a 2100, though I'm retaking this january for a higher score. I have yet to take the ACT, but I will do so in February. I received a 740 on my SAT II Eng. Literature, and a 780 on my SAT II Math IIc. I'm a full IB diploma recipient, a National Merit Finalist, and an AP Scholar with Distinction, having taken and passed about 8 AP tests. </p>
<p>Fourth, extracurriculars. I've played piano for 14 years, and I've passed the highest of piano certification [I've received the Advanced Certificate of Merit, passed Panels, and received Branch Honors]. I also have played drums for 4 years. I deal with music extensively, and I'm trying to get involved in community related arts projects, yet I've found those involved with these to be extremely unwelcoming and hard to get a hold of [relating back to my reasons as to why I want to leave]. In high school, I volunteered by playing in performances for the elderly, have accompanied the school choir on occasion, and was secretary of the school cahmber music club for two years. On campus right now, I'm in the school orchestra, and I played both percussion and harpsichord/celeste over the past two quarters. </p>
<p>Here are the colleges I'm trying to apply to transfer to starting with the unbelievable [and completely fantastical] and moving downwards to the feasible:
Harvard
Yale
Stanford
Dartmouth
Brown
Northwestern
Cornell
University of Michigan Ann Arbor</p>
<p>Is my reason to transfer powerful, are my college choices even feasible in the slightest? Any recommendations on your part? Could you help me with my reasoning, or ways I could possibly express myself to make my case sound extraordinary and most urgent?</p>
<p>Let me say one thing, however: I don't need to go to Harvard or Yale, but I would like to. It isn't the alpha and omega of my efforts, and right now I just really want to get away from UCSD. I really would like to go to Dartmouth for the obvious reasons [strong education, decent education, eclectic student body, but these are reasons why the highly selective schools are always so desireable]. Plus, Dartmouth has an outstanding medical study reputation.</p>
<p>Thanks for your help. =). </p>
<p>If you want me to clarify anything, I will gladly do so.</p>