quick read: which one's better?

<p>2 essays of about 400 words for Princeton (prompt: write about a person who has had an influence in your life). They differ by about 4-5 sentences (100 words). I'm submitting my app today. Pick and choose your favorite.</p>

<p>sure send it over</p>

<p>Sure, PM it.</p>

<p>May I read it? If so, PM!</p>