Read an informal, blunt, "Why X?" essay draft?

<p>I'm kinda tired right now, and I just wrote an extremely conversational "Why X?" essay draft. Literally, this is what I would say if a friend asked me why I wanted to go to School X, bad jokes and all.</p>

<p>That said, I like the essay for its straightforwardness, but I could use a fresh pair of eyes to look it over. Anyone interested?</p>

<p>Sure, send it over.</p>