Read/Help on my common app essay?

<p>I started my essay and I have my train of thought written down but I'm having trouble formulating it into something that I can present in my essay. Basically I know what I want to write, I just don't know how to approach it. If anyone would like to read what I have so far and give a few pointers I'd really appreciate!</p>

<p>I’ll gladly read it and give you feedback.</p>

<p>Just to help, you’d probably be able to find more people willing to help in the College Essay section of the forum.</p>

<p>redCrayons, I realized that after I posted. for some reason I couldn’t find the forum. But thank you for your advice</p>

<p>I’ll help c:</p>

<p>If you still need somebody to read/edit, I’d be happy to</p>

<p>PM me, I’ll help!</p>