<p>I wrote a very personal essay for my top college, and I would rather my parents not read it. So I am asking you, intelligent people of CC, will you help me out? I will PM you the essay if you will. Thank you so much.</p>
<p>I would be willing to read it, and give you my remarks, if you want.</p>
<p>I don’t mind reading it .</p>
<p>Bump! I still desperately need editors!</p>
<p>I’ll read it! For what school?</p>
<p>It is being sent to Yale :3</p>