<p>Hey fellow CCers,</p>
<p>Well i finished writing one of my Common Application essays. I would prefer that someone who is already in college reads it... or someone who is not applying this admissions cycle.... but i would not mind THAT much to have it proofread by anyone who wants.</p>
<p>Tell me if you want to read the essay or not. I am looking for constructive criticism and how you think it is, overall..</p>
<p>Any takers?</p>
<p>PS: i already posted on the College Essay section but no one answered</p>