Read my common app essay and ill read yours!

College Essays
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<p>im looking for some people to have a quick read at my common app essay. Im am more concerned with the topic rather than grammer in it right now.</p>

<p>The essay is about an encounter with race issues, and Im wondering if its is unfocused or too controversial.</p>

<p>Thanks for the help and Ill be more than happy to look at yours!</p>

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<p>hey this is a bump</p>

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<p>sounds good :slight_smile: PM me yours and i’ll PM you mine.</p>

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<p>I’ll read… I’ll send you mine, too.</p>

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<p>PM me :slight_smile: I’ll read yours.</p>

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<p>PM and I’ll help!!</p>