Read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Anyone want to read my common app essay on the Red Sox? It's been proofread and edited, so I think it's getting near to being done, but I'd love some feedback. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Bump, I’d love some help :)</p>

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<p>LOL I hate the redsox (angels :D) but I don’t mind helping
Won’t hold my bias against you haha
PM away</p>

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<p>haha yankees fan but i can read it if you want</p>

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<p>I’ll help you edit!! :D</p>

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<p>;0
pm mee !!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Just out of curiosity, what Common App prompt did you follow to write about the Sox?</p>

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<p>i’ld love to read it, i’ve edited and proofread so many admissions essays for the writing clinic at my school :)</p>