read my common app transfer essay?

<p>Is there anyone online that would be willing to read and critique my "Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve" common app essay? I'm planning on applying to Brown U, but i didn't want to make this one too tailored or else i would simply sound redundant in my "why transfer to brown" supplement essay.</p>

<p>Send it over</p>