Read my essay and tear me down :( (common app essay)

College Essays
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<p>I finished my essay on the prompt: Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you. </p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would read my essay and give me some constructive criticism. Be brutal please :D</p>

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<p>I'd be willing to proofread it.</p>

<p>Dang, I should get started on the common app essays too >_<.</p>

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<p>i am an English major, i would be happy to read over it and give you feedback. GL :)</p>

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<p>I'd be willing to read. JieHan can verify that I give quick feedback.</p>

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<p>PM me and I'll be glad to have a look.</p>

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<p>i'll be glad to proofread it, send it over</p>

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<p>I'll give up some time to critique it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I will give you some critique. pm me</p>

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<p>I'll be glad to read it and give you suggestions. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me. I'll help.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it. Just PM it over.</p>

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<p>pm it to me. =]</p>

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<p>pm it to me im at my grandparents house and bored</p>

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<p>Did my suggestions help?</p>

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<p>I'll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>wow u attempted a hard one...
ill read it if u want</p>