read my essay please! --topic: jokes

College Essays
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<p>is anyone willing to read my essay and give me advice/critique on it?
it can be about grammer, flow, content, anything!
i just hope i dont get advice like.."trash your whole essay" :(</p>

<p>this is for the commonapp.
thank you so much - i appreciate all your help !</p>

<p>oh and this is a revised rough draft.</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine. PM me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay.</p>

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<p>PM it over i’ll take a look :)</p>

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<p>Bump 10 char</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>bump. just revised essay :)</p>

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<p>Send it over :)</p>