<p>I whipped it up in less than an hour which scares me.. it's still in its rough stages but i'd like some imput before i take the time to perfect it!</p>
<p>let me know if you think it's too cliche!!</p>
<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it, just PM it over.</p>
<p>Pm it, I’ll take a look</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me!</p>
<p>Pm it over, I’ll help!</p>
<p>I would love to 
PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’d love to read it :)</p>
<p>PM me it! :)</p>
<p>I will read/critique if you still need help. Also, be wary of sending it to CC members who have little history and whose only posts are offering to edit essays.</p>
<p>PM it over! i love to edit :)</p>
<p>Sure, I’l take a look!</p>
<p>I’ll take a crack at it :)</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll look at it.</p>
<p>You can PM it to me</p>
<p>I would be happy to take a look. I have a B.A. from Stanford and a J.D. from Harvard (and can verify for you). Since joining CC, I have provided essay comments on 22 drafts for 12 students. If you would like to get started, PM me!
JP</p>