read my essay?

[stacym]

<p>maybe this is an over-done request, but please-- if you have the time, then i would like to PM my essay for critique. i'm terribly nervous since i have absolutely nothing strong in terms of grades/scores, circumstance, or anything else for that matter. everything's been sent and all, i know. a friend who goes to columbia said it was fine, as did my brother who is a pretty good student, but i'm just wondering.</p>

<p>i just know i want a good fit of a school where i can learn the best comprehensively. And then maybe end up in the tv/film industry (tentative). columbia sounded nice. really, really nice. :P</p>

[confidentialcoll]

<p>stacy, i read your essay (thru cerberus), it's fantastic, don't change a thing, other people might not like it because it's not uptight and you don't go over all your extra-curricular and academic interests (which would be a stupid thing to do) but it's definitely one of the best i've ever read, it reveals a lot about your personality and portrays you as one cool, interesting and likable teenager. I hope you get rejected by NU so that you come to Columbia :).</p>