<p>It has to with my childhood, and parentage. Kind of cliche, but I think I offer a sort of new perspective on it. I'm especially looking for tips regarding structure and flow. Let me know and I'll PM you. Thanks!</p>
<p>I’d be glad to try and help :)</p>
<p>If you PM me the prompt and the essay, I would be happy to provide feedback.
JP</p>