Read my Georgetown essay, please?

<p>Yeah, so like the title says, if you have the time could you possibly read it, edit it, give me any feedback and what not? It's only the short essay about the school activity and it's 451 words. PM me if you can, please. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Would be happy to help! :)</p>

<p>@CCstudent1234 YAY!! Thank you so much, I will PM it to you right away :)</p>

<p>Pm it to me if you still need help!</p>

<p>I will read! PM me</p>

<p>I can read if you’d like. I’m going to be a college freshman, so I’ve been through the process.</p>