Read my Short Exracurricular Essay?

<p>Would anyone like to read my short extracurricular essay for the common application and give me feedback? It's only about 180 words so it is very short and easy to read.</p>

<p>Sure , I would love to help. PM it .</p>

<p>I also have a question regarding the short answer on the common app.
Can I write the extracurricular essay based on a hobby or a passion i have? or does it strictly have to be an extracurricular activity or work experience only.</p>

<p>I think that you could write it about a hobby. I wrote mine about teaching music lessons to children which sort of a hobby.</p>

<p>I would love to read it, send it over!</p>