I’m a senior in high school and I’ve been working on the short essay about extracurriculars that some colleges require. Mine is a different style, to some extent, so I was wondering if anyone would like to read it and give me feedback. I’m a little paranoid about posting my essay, so I’d like it if older posters and people who aren’t applying to college this year would respond only. Thank you!! 
BTW, this is the prompt:
“Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences that was particularly meaningful to you.”
