I’ve been told that its poor and I need advice, thanks!
Sure, PM me. My post history will show I’ve already graduated.
If you want you can PM me. I’m also a rising senior but I’m from Canada and have no interest in applying to state schools. I’m in the process of writing my essays and I need to take a break from reading my own writing. I love editing essays and my friends say I’m a pretty good editor. I understand if you do not want me to read it, though. Good luck with your applications!