<p>I had to write an essay for English class. We got time to peer-proof-read but I don't really think that works for me (Especially when people don't notice that part of a sentence is missing o.O). I was going to have the teacher read it but not time.</p>
<p>I basically had to show how Fahrenheit 451 predicted our society. It'd be great if someone could read over it and give some tips on making preview lines as I am missing them in my paper :/</p>
<p>PM them to me. I read Fahrenheit 451 and since I'm in AP English next year I will have to tutor anyways. I'll help you out but you won't get them back until sometime tommorow.</p>
<p>oh no...last time I read someone's essay and made modifications to it they got into harvard with that same essay and never expressed any gratitude for my help...and if you know me from my other posts I didn't do it for any "crush" or "love" for the girl I helped either. I just like the feeling of authority :D</p>
<p>Wow. Domination, scary. It's not an app to go to Harvard, it's an English paper. Why not help a kid out?</p>
<p>OH lol I didn't even read the OP I just was ranting about a minor injustice haha.</p>
<p>I didn't read fahrenheit 451....yet :/</p>
<p>I read it :)</p>
<p>You can PM it to me if you want...tell me if you want a general/grammar kind of edit or a "kill" kind of edit, ha ha.</p>