Readers for common app

<p>Can anyone read my common app essay and supplement.
Please make suggestions for improvement. And be very harsh on grammar. Please also tell me how to make my essay more polished. Experienced readers please.
Thank you =)</p>

<p>I’m up and will read it if you like. But I’m not going to work that hard and go through your grammar closely, you should do that yourself. Just will give you off the cuff comments if you want.</p>

<p>I am a grammar nazi. So I would be happy to help :)</p>