Readers: Please help me with my Why Transfer essay!

<p>I have finished my draft of the most important "why" essay.</p>

<p>Could anyone kindly take a look at it?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>ill look at it</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll look at it. I’ll comment on content and what you are lacking. I won’t edit for grammar or sentence structure tho. Just pm it over to me!</p>

<p>i’ll take a look</p>

<p>PM me, i’ll take a look. Will only edit based on stylistic issues, structure, and content</p>

<p>Thanks guys!</p>

<p>pm me and ill look</p>

<p>PM it to me, </p>

<p>I am willing to edit for grammar.</p>