Can anyone take a look at my why transfer essay??

Transfer Students
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<p>Heyyyyy</p>

<p>I have just finished the why transfer essay. Could anyone look at my essay and help me revise it??</p>

<p>Thanks so muchhhh:)</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>me too! i feel like an adcom haha</p>

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<p>^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^</p>

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<p>im not a native speaker so some of word may sound weird. Wish you guys can help me fix it.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look… PM it or send it to <a href="mailto:kbeilman131@verizon.net">kbeilman131@verizon.net</a></p>

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<p>Sure, I can take a look.</p>

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<p>Thanks! you guys are so nice :D</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>