Really personal essay: Help me cut 150 words from my UNC essay!!!

<p>I've already turned it in to Brown, now I just need it down to 500 words for UNC. Its really personal so it's hard for me to get the perspective needed to edit a lot.
Free KARMA!!
PM me I guess. I know how to know if someone's pm-ed though, but whatever. just please no UNC-ers! Or saboteurs! </p>

<p>I'd be happy to return the favor for anyone too. : )</p>

<p>I will. :)</p>

<p>wonderful!</p>

<p>i just pm-ed it to you.</p>

<p>I'm not applying to any schools beyond Maryland so I wouldn't mind helping. If you could look at one of my supplement essays s that would be great. if not I can still read yours. if you need another reader, pm me.</p>

<p>sure only if you need to</p>

<p>I'll read it. :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look! I'm not applying to anything near the coasts so we're set.</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>