Reeeeeaaaaally last-minute essay critiqueing!

<p>I'm applying to UC as a transfer, and my essays are due in slightly less than 24 hours. I just finished the first of two essays, and I would REALLY appreciate if someone could give me feedback on my first essay! :)</p>

<p>Thank you SO much in advance!</p>

<p>Ask me for it and I'll PM it to you. =]</p>

<p>Sure! PM away.</p>

<p>^ Thanks! Anyone else? I REALLY need feedback on it (I have no one else to critique it, and it's due in about 12 hours!).</p>

<p>PM me brotha.</p>

<p>Wanna swap? I'm in the same boat as you are</p>

<p>pm it over. I' ll check it out</p>